Interesting start, but I do not agree with the concept of the chain link across the whole composition. Maybe transition the link into vines or tree branches (or any of those “detail” shots you showed last week). Likewise, I do not agree with the river-bed all the way across the image. Blend this into mechanical details. The birds on the wire might be the only exception... but conceptually, why are they positioned across the bottom? Write about your work so that we know what’s going on... Adjust your palettes so that panel 1 and 2 are analogous, and panel three is a complement based on the combined analogous palettes Make sure to post your second panel
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Interesting start, but I do not agree with the concept of the chain link across the whole composition. Maybe transition the link into vines or tree branches (or any of those “detail” shots you showed last week).
Likewise, I do not agree with the river-bed all the way across the image. Blend this into mechanical details.
The birds on the wire might be the only exception... but conceptually, why are they positioned across the bottom?
Write about your work so that we know what’s going on...
Adjust your palettes so that panel 1 and 2 are analogous, and panel three is a complement based on the combined analogous palettes
Make sure to post your second panel
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